For balance, I think verso 2 or 3 would work best. Version two for movement is very active. The framing works eel in version one of proportion. The emphasis and economy one is good, just perhaps open up on of the bottom corners a bit.
I agree with Ellla. I think your work with patterns are real successful, and i am also really interested in your variation of lines.
Your emphasis and economy i think can be pushed a little further because it seems almost too literal to the meaning and is not as exciting as your other work.
I think the first image for proportion is stronger…because of how a couple of building skylines are enclosed in one structure. i think the first balance is stronger. i like the first movement…the roads and the spades signs work like leading lines upwards and really gives the image a sense of motion the second proportion is really fun.
For the first balance image, I think it might be too static. My eye doesn't really move around the image. I like the depth and perspective in the second proportion image. Your level of detail is strong throughout.
For balance, I think verso 2 or 3 would work best. Version two for movement is very active. The framing works eel in version one of proportion. The emphasis and economy one is good, just perhaps open up on of the bottom corners a bit.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ellla. I think your work with patterns are real successful, and i am also really interested in your variation of lines.
DeleteYour emphasis and economy i think can be pushed a little further because it seems almost too literal to the meaning and is not as exciting as your other work.
I think the first image for proportion is stronger…because of how a couple of building skylines are enclosed in one structure.
ReplyDeletei think the first balance is stronger.
i like the first movement…the roads and the spades signs work like leading lines upwards and really gives the image a sense of motion
the second proportion is really fun.
For the first balance image, I think it might be too static. My eye doesn't really move around the image. I like the depth and perspective in the second proportion image. Your level of detail is strong throughout.
ReplyDeleteI really like your first proportion image, first balance and 2nd movement. They all seem to catch my eye. The detail in them is so apparent and good
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