For emphasis and economy- I like the second one. The first one could potentially work if you leave the bottom part you made black white. But #2 is really interesting, I think it could even work for movement since the triangles get smaller farther back. For proportion- I like #2- I think the feet are visually well balanced with the flower and the background wall is also well balanced with the dark bottom and patterned top. For movement- I real like the idea behind the first one. I would add more curves to the "hair strands" to make it even more dynamic. I even think that this one could be your emphasis and economy and your second one for economy could work well for movement. For balance- I like the first one better. I think you should maybe drop the line between the dark bottom and lighter top so that it seems more proportionate.
Proportion 2 i think is stronger, but i think the first one for proportion could be enhanced if you colored in parts of the back ground? i like the balance and movement ones of the body from the side…both movement pieces are actually very striking
I like the second image for proportion, the second image for balance, the first image for movement and your second image for economy ( i also think your first image for proportion could be used as emphasis)
I am really glad you stuck with using geometric shapes that are consistent through your work because it is interesting to see the unity between images.
I really like your second economy however, I also feel like this could make a successful movement/balance piece if you need that. I really like your first economy and your second proportion too
Emphasis and economy version 2 is quite good as is proportion #2. start with these and we can look at the rest on Tuesday.
ReplyDeleteFor emphasis and economy- I like the second one. The first one could potentially work if you leave the bottom part you made black white. But #2 is really interesting, I think it could even work for movement since the triangles get smaller farther back. For proportion- I like #2- I think the feet are visually well balanced with the flower and the background wall is also well balanced with the dark bottom and patterned top. For movement- I real like the idea behind the first one. I would add more curves to the "hair strands" to make it even more dynamic. I even think that this one could be your emphasis and economy and your second one for economy could work well for movement. For balance- I like the first one better. I think you should maybe drop the line between the dark bottom and lighter top so that it seems more proportionate.
ReplyDeleteProportion 2 i think is stronger, but i think the first one for proportion could be enhanced if you colored in parts of the back ground? i like the balance and movement ones of the body from the side…both movement pieces are actually very striking
ReplyDeleteI like the second image for proportion, the second image for balance, the first image for movement and your second image for economy ( i also think your first image for proportion could be used as emphasis)
ReplyDeleteI am really glad you stuck with using geometric shapes that are consistent through your work because it is interesting to see the unity between images.
I really like your second economy however, I also feel like this could make a successful movement/balance piece if you need that. I really like your first economy and your second proportion too
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